Classwork 6

THOMS: Sally

1.Sally, who taught you to paint your eyes like Cleopatra?

2.No nosy neighbors

3.  skirt straight

4.Sally is the girl with eyes like Egypt and nylons the color of smoke.

5. her hair is shinny black like raven feathers

6. little window latch

7. somebody saying

8. wrong, without the whole world waitng for you

Blues Ain’t No Mocking Bird

1. “Looks like a plastic spider web.”

2. crowd cause

3 trying to talk

4.woulda done whatcha

5. clear and cold

6. other hand flies like a sudden and gentle bird\

7. fingers off the film

8.Cathy, cliimbin

I think that The house on Mango Street uses elements better than the other story. I think this because it was easier to find these elements.  The House on Mango Street uses a variety or elements more than the other story because it is more interesting by using more similies. The other story has a lot of alleration so that’s good. I think that the elements in THOMS is better because they are used more and it is a more interesting story.

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