Classwork 6

My intro sets up my paragraphs because what I talk about in my intro is in my other paragraphs. It make logical sense. It does follow the thesis beacse I talk about the problem and the solution. My paragraphs are in logical order. The conclusion soso raps up the paragraphs and I need to work on it better. My paragraphs commentary sentences examine the importance of the evidence. My Ts And Cs discuss the same topics.