Monthly Archives: January 2012

 My partner has a very interesting hook in her intro paragraph. She has good facts, but she could use some more tags. Her paragraphs don’tover repeat themselves. Her paragraphs are in order and they make sense. Her conclusion paragraph sums up … Continue reading →

My intro sets up my paragraphs because what I talk about in my intro is in my other paragraphs. It make logical sense. It does follow the thesis beacse I talk about the problem and the solution. My paragraphs are … Continue reading →

1st Topic Sentence: http://www.sitnews.net/0503news/051303MCA/051303_cleanup.htmlhttp://www.romancingalaska.com/southcentral/SC_kenai_beach_salamatof_beach.htm; http://peninsulaclarion.com/news/2011-08-03/beach-clean-up-process-underway#.TjqGL7-SzHg  http://www.wildlifecareofventura.org/Animal%20Help%20Information%20Pages/Nuisance%20Animals%20-%20General%20Info.htm  http://www.kab.org/site/PageServer?pagename=Focus_litter_prevention This shows that people enjoy the treasures they find and that they like going to beaches. The second link shows that the Problem can also be reduced by picking up after our selves. … Continue reading →