Monthly Archives: November 2011

Revising elements: Main idea is stated somewhere in the first paragraph. Theme is clear. Main idea stays the same through out paragraphs Doesn’t change from past to present tense. Stays in one ‘tense’. Grabs readers attention Editing elements: Correct capitalization No … Continue reading →

I have discovered that I had a lot of Rest in Peace words. I used really a lot.I used I a lot at the beginnings of several of my sentences. Also I had a lot of contractions. I will use other words … Continue reading →