Monthly Archives: October 2011

I think that you could have use a little bit more transition words in your commentary sentences.  You could maybe use a little but more quotes. Your paragraphs are really good! To me they flow well.  I needed to add … Continue reading →

TS: Montresor  feels no guilt for his harsh actions. CD: Montresor says,”The noise lasted for several minutes, during which that I might hearken to it with the satisfaction,I reasoned my labours and sat down upon the borers.” CM:This shows that he isn’t … Continue reading →

How does the symbol of the combs and/or the watch change in “Gift of the Magi?” TS:The symbol of the co weakens and their love grows stronger. CD:The comb symbolize Jims love for Della. CM:This symbol of love weakens when Della cuts her hair.  CM:This is because her … Continue reading →

In “The Bass, the River, and Shelia Mant,” should the narrator cut the line. Why or why not? TS: The narrator should have not cut the line because he likes fishing. CD: HOwever at the end of the story the girl he … Continue reading →